Sky Elf: The Anti-Matter Chronicles (The Matter Chronicles Book 2)
– Learn More(All 9 books are free Dec 7th to Dec 9th) The favored conclusion to a bad dream is waking up, but when you do, and three of your friends have been taken captive by an invading army, the nightmare continues. A month ago Lauren had been thrust into the strange world, proclaimed an Earth Daughter, and asked to find the fleeing populations— unusual events to this regular seventeen-year-old schoolgirl, but now she is looking to the elves and dwarves who were guiding them to save her friends. However, even if they do find them, there are two small problems: they are lost and surrounded by an army.
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Pre-editing: style 70%spelling100%grammar 77%overall 82%
Post-editing: style 70%spelling100%grammar 97%overall 89%
Final summary: style 94% spelling 100%grammar 97%overall 97%
Notes:
Grammar lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of employing excess introductory/gerund clauses, which makes for faster reading.
Style lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of an abundance of introductory/gerund clauses that makes for faster reading. As a result, these books use 10% to 15% fewer coordinators. Style will all be subjective to both the reader and the writer.
Summary: the pre-edit score of 82% increased to 89%. The remaining is based primarily on style. Is it perfect? No, but statistically speaking and taking into account style, it is 97%+ correct.
Please keep in mind that not all of the recommendations were correct, thus I omitted them.
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Dialog:51.30%
Dialog tagged: 13.10%
Passive index: 2 (target < 25)
Felsch Reading Ease: 86 (Target >60)
Glue index: 46.0% (target <40%)
Easy to read paragraphs: 1637 (97%)
Less Easy paragraphs to read: 50 (3%)
More difficult paragraphs to read: 8 (0%)
339adverbs (191 outside of dialog) & 0 are used more than 10 times